Swapped
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peach rays bri
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Hallie
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Swapped
Chapter 1
I was swapped at birth,I'm aware.I've never believed I was,until this day. "You evil child,I knew you weren't my child" I stared at my mom."I saw your face,I looked at your brothers&sisters,you didn't look a bit like them.Your sister has always been much prettier than you.Go and look at your sister,then look in the mirror...your nothing but dirt compared to her."
"Just get out my sight" I screamed."Wouldn't be happier to" mom laughed.She walked out of the room in this elegant and delightful way.I just wanted a hug off the mum I thought she was.I dragged myself off the couch and managed to make it to,Eliza's room before I broke down with tears."Whats wrong,Madison" Eliza said gently,"It's all just mom,she doesn't care,shes a heartless person with no feelings" I cried out loud,"Madison,watch your tone of voice,she'll hear you" Eliza whispered.I hugged Eliza so hard,if mom walked in she would accuse me of trying to squeeze her to death.Eliza hugged me back.I thought about running away to Aunt Hannah's but that idea sounded so stupid,I'd barely make it out the door without mom seeing."Go in to your room,Madison.I'll come and see you once I've gone and got a snack." Eliza said.I slowly walked out her room.Mom could of been in my room snooping through my personal notes,I write about her.I turned the handle of the door and shouted,"I KNEW YOU WERE IN HERE",but she wasn't.I had a nap on my bed,I heard voices coming from the hallway so I pretended to be asleep."Madison really needs to understand the hate I have too her" mom screamed."Stop being like that,mom.Shes only a child,she came into my room crying because of you.You need to locked up,you animal." Eliza ran upstairs and into my room."
I quickly sat up and said,"we need to go to,aunt hannah's." I said quitely."Mom's going to sleep in a while,she said.We have time then or tomorrow when she leaves for work." I was happy that Eliza agreed,I thought she was going to turn to mom.Things started to look up.
Hallie- Furtastic Bear
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This is very realistic...because some parents are like that and it's very sad and heartbreaking. I'm looking forward in reading more :)
gabi- BP Moderator
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Oooh, this reminds me of someone on BP..Imma not say there name though. :3
Cool Story, Bro. TellItAgain.
Cool Story, Bro. TellItAgain.
peach rays bri- Administrator / Owner
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Re: Swapped
Agreed with gabiii and bri... Yeah..
I really like the story... Pretty good.. And sad, wonder what happens later
I really like the story... Pretty good.. And sad, wonder what happens later
maybear2☆9- Event Planner
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Yhur a really talented writer!
Keep writing. [=
Keep writing. [=
♥BlueRainbow- Event Planner
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it's so sad.. like gabi said some parents are like this. /: Very sad, and realistic. Keep writing more ;D
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