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Goodbye, Friend.
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Goodbye, Friend.
This is a poem dedicated to my friend in school. She is leaving and I wanted to write a poem about it.
Why did you have to go?
You left me there to cry
As I saw you look at me,
I waved my goodbye.
I was on the bus
I saw you in your car
Tears ran down my face,
As your mom drove you far.
I looked at you for the last time
Not believing my eyes
I wiped my tears,
As I cried desperate cries.
I couldn't see you at all
Nor your beautiful smiles
As I tried to not think about you,
I realized we were apart by miles.
My friends comforted me
But that was not the same
You had something special,
The comforts I received were lame.
When I got home
I cried in my room
I didn't know what to do,
My life was falling apart, I assume.
The next day I was lonely
Until my dad said something new
I got a letter from someone,
And that someone was YOU!
Mmhmm, comments? ♥
Why did you have to go?
You left me there to cry
As I saw you look at me,
I waved my goodbye.
I was on the bus
I saw you in your car
Tears ran down my face,
As your mom drove you far.
I looked at you for the last time
Not believing my eyes
I wiped my tears,
As I cried desperate cries.
I couldn't see you at all
Nor your beautiful smiles
As I tried to not think about you,
I realized we were apart by miles.
My friends comforted me
But that was not the same
You had something special,
The comforts I received were lame.
When I got home
I cried in my room
I didn't know what to do,
My life was falling apart, I assume.
The next day I was lonely
Until my dad said something new
I got a letter from someone,
And that someone was YOU!
Mmhmm, comments? ♥
LaEpicKelseyYo:O♥- Newbie Bear
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Aww love it! First its sad then it has a happy ending
TinyJessie=]- Furbulous Bear
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Very cute poem :)
Love it!
Love it!
Leila- Newsteam
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Beautiful, I can totally relate to this poem.
First, I thought it was all sad, then in the ending, it was happy. :3
Luhv the poem.♥ ^-^
xoxo,
therainboww.♥
First, I thought it was all sad, then in the ending, it was happy. :3
Luhv the poem.♥ ^-^
xoxo,
therainboww.♥
♥BlueRainbow- Event Planner
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That was a great poem!! well done i hope you keep writing!!
hella fab- Featured Member
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Nice poem! [:
Starla2hip56- Bearilliant Bear
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Awwhh! I love it! Awesome Kelsey :DD
RachelGoesRAWRツ- Bearilliant Bear
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
Aww! That's very kind of you.
Hope you get to stay in touch with your friend! <33
Hope you get to stay in touch with your friend! <33
lulu- BP Moderator
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
What a beautiful poem, and I love it :)
Sad start, happy ending, so glad you are happeir now, and I LOVE it :)
I can relate(: and I love it, can't wait to read your other awesome poems.
Sad start, happy ending, so glad you are happeir now, and I LOVE it :)
I can relate(: and I love it, can't wait to read your other awesome poems.
maybear2☆9- Event Planner
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Re: Goodbye, Friend.
I love it♥
Sorry about your friend moving,my friend Hannah moved school in Reception or Year 1
You'll see her another day
Sorry about your friend moving,my friend Hannah moved school in Reception or Year 1
You'll see her another day
Hallie- Furtastic Bear
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Awww! I'm sososo sorry about your friend. My best friend moved in 4th grade, and we had letters we could write to each other, but I lost his address. ):): ahwww.. Amazing job anyway, I hope things will be good for you! :) Great poem!♥
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that's a great poem <33
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