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Goodbye, Friend.

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Post by LaEpicKelseyYo:O♥ Sat Nov 12, 2011 6:57 am

This is a poem dedicated to my friend in school. She is leaving and I wanted to write a poem about it.

Why did you have to go?
You left me there to cry
As I saw you look at me,
I waved my goodbye.
I was on the bus
I saw you in your car
Tears ran down my face,
As your mom drove you far.
I looked at you for the last time
Not believing my eyes
I wiped my tears,
As I cried desperate cries.
I couldn't see you at all
Nor your beautiful smiles
As I tried to not think about you,
I realized we were apart by miles.
My friends comforted me
But that was not the same
You had something special,
The comforts I received were lame.
When I got home
I cried in my room
I didn't know what to do,
My life was falling apart, I assume.
The next day I was lonely
Until my dad said something new
I got a letter from someone,
And that someone was YOU!

Mmhmm, comments? ♥
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Post by TinyJessie=] Sat Nov 12, 2011 11:03 am

Aww love it! First its sad then it has a happy ending
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Post by Leila Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:15 pm

Very cute poem :)
Love it!
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Post by ♥BlueRainbow Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:12 pm

Beautiful, I can totally relate to this poem.
First, I thought it was all sad, then in the ending, it was happy. :3
Luhv the poem.♥ ^-^
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Post by hella fab Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:25 pm

That was a great poem!! well done i hope you keep writing!!
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Post by Starla2hip56 Sat Nov 12, 2011 4:43 pm

Nice poem! [:
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Post by RachelGoesRAWRツ Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:22 pm

Awwhh! I love it! Awesome Kelsey :DD
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Post by lulu Wed Nov 30, 2011 1:49 am

Aww! That's very kind of you.
Hope you get to stay in touch with your friend! <33
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Post by maybear2☆9 Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:45 am

What a beautiful poem, and I love it :)
Sad start, happy ending, so glad you are happeir now, and I LOVE it :)
I can relate(: and I love it, can't wait to read your other awesome poems.
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Post by Hallie Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:21 pm

I love it♥
Sorry about your friend moving,my friend Hannah moved school in Reception or Year 1
You'll see her another day
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Post by Jeanna Mon Dec 05, 2011 9:11 pm

Awww! I'm sososo sorry about your friend. My best friend moved in 4th grade, and we had letters we could write to each other, but I lost his address. ):): ahwww.. Amazing job anyway, I hope things will be good for you! :) Great poem!♥
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Post by Betty♥1D Mon Dec 05, 2011 9:20 pm

that's a great poem <33
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